Path: newsspool2.news.atl.earthlink.net!stamper.news.atl.earthlink.net!elnk-atl-nf1!newsfeed.earthlink.net!prodigy.com!atl-c02.usenetserver.com!news.usenetserver.com!feed3.newsreader.com!newsreader.com!yellow.newsread.com!news-toy.newsread.com!netaxs.com!newsread.com!POSTED.newshog.newsread.com!not-for-mail Newsgroups: alt.startrek.creative.erotica.moderated Approved: ascem@earthlink.net Organization: Better Living Thru TrekSmut Sender: ascem@earthlink.net Message-ID: From: "Elizabeth Helena" MIME-Version: 1.0 Mailing-List: list ASCEML@yahoogroups.com; contact ASCEML-owner@yahoogroups.com Subject: NEW DS9 Humiliation 0/1 (G/Tain, late Alara challenge) NC-17 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=ISO-8859-1 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Lines: 97 Date: Sun, 08 Aug 2004 12:55:03 GMT NNTP-Posting-Host: 209.198.142.218 X-Complaints-To: Abuse Role , We Care X-Trace: newshog.newsread.com 1091969703 209.198.142.218 (Sun, 08 Aug 2004 08:55:03 EDT) NNTP-Posting-Date: Sun, 08 Aug 2004 08:55:03 EDT Xref: news.earthlink.net alt.startrek.creative.erotica.moderated:82525 X-Received-Date: Sun, 08 Aug 2004 05:55:06 PDT (newsspool2.news.atl.earthlink.net) Title: Humiliation=20 Author: Elizabeth Helena=20 Series: DS9=20 Codes: G/m (Garak/Tain, Garak/Pythas Lok), challenge response Rating: NC-17 and I'm not kidding!=20 Warning: Yep, as the title indicates, this is yet another Elizabeth=20 Helena bucket o' fun. But seriously folks, this story contains=20 incest, rape, and generalized mind-fucks. Bloody hell, I squicked=20 myself just thinking up this story, and even shortbread cookies=20 couldn't make me feel better afterwards. The opinions expressed in the story are those of the characters, not necessary those of the=20 depraved, shortbread-loving author.=20 Spoilers: From this point onwards, the whole series (seasons two,=20 five, and seven especially), "A Stitch in Time," and possibly some appetites may be spoiled.=20 Summary: Garak is expelled from the Obsidian Order and exiled from=20 it's all Alara's fault! And Pieter Spierenburg is also to blame for pointing out in "The Spectacle of Suffering" that historically exile was always combined with other punishments.=20 Oh, and it's Andy Robinson's fault because he never explained why Pythas Lok was head of the Obsidian Order for so short a=20 time. And ... um ... oh hell, it's all my fault.=20 Challenge Chocolate: Goes to Garak who spreads it all over a certain=20 genetically-enhanced non-alien, then Picard shows up and =96 oh sorry, jm's supposed to write that story :-).=20 Obscure Cardassian Characters Alert: For those who haven't=20 obsessively reread "A Stitch in Time" around two hundred times, there are a couple of characters in this story which may be=20 unfamiliar, and who, despite my best efforts, may cause you to=20 go `who the hell is this?'.=20 Pythas Lok (aka Eight Lubak) attended the Bamarren Institute for=20 State Intelligence along with a young Elim Garak (aka Ten Lubak), who=20 he befriended there. Like Elim, Pythas joined the Obsidian Order and=20 was involved in the demise of Procal Dukat (Gul Skrain Dukat's=20 daddy), but unlike Garak, Pythas Lok briefly inherited leadership of=20 the Order after Enabran Tain `retired.'=20 Corbin Entek likewise attended Bamarran, but is most memorable as the=20 Obsidian Order agent in "Second Skin" who transformed Kira into Iliana Ghemor, and about whom Garak uttered the eulogy: "A pity. I rather liked him."=20 Limor Prang was in charge of Garak's initial training in the Obsidian Order, and was the head supervisor of Order agents.=20 Tolan was the man who pretended to be Garak's father and Mila's husband. I made up Lec Rhetan although I was inspired by Garak's lack of grief when he learned of the deaths of his former colleagues=20 during "Improbable Cause." However, Adrienne gave Rhetan his name as she felt Fuckface, the name I used in my initial drafts,=20 lacked a certain Cardassian subtlety.=20=20 Disclaimer: Obviously I don't own these characters because TPTB only traumatize fans by having beloved characters take part in dune=20 buggy chases and fan dances.=20 Betas: Emptyfox, who beta'd above and beyond the call of duty, and Adrienne who claims she's not ashamed to be my friend even though I squicked her by writing about lizard incest. Further Thanks to: BGM, Una McCormack, Olivia Montieth, Kathryn=20 Ramage, and Mark Russel Stanley. While I doubt that they would want=20 their names associated with this nasty little fic, I cannot ignore=20 the beneficial influence that their writing - especially the angsty=20 moments and lovely shower scenes - had on this story.=20=20 Archiving: Okay, but why would you want to? Not that there's anything wrong with lizard incest fetishists per se.=20 Feedback: Yes please, other than recommendations for therapy, cause=20 already there. You can chastise me privately at elizabeth loves her=20 thesaurus at hotmail.com (no spaces) or humiliate me in public on the=20 list.=20 Appropriate Quote Under the Circumstances:=20 Tain: You're not my son. Garak: Father =96 father, you're dying. For once in your life speak the truth. Tain: I should have killed your mother before you were born. You've always been a weakness I can't afford. Garak: So you've told me, many times.=20 "In Purgatory's Shadow," Star Trek: Deep Space Nine=20 ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ ASCEM messages are copied to a mailing list. Most recent messages can be found at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/ASCEML. NewMessage: